Prewriting

Please list 10 ways you can improve your essay scores

1.read the question more cleary                        6.re-read my essay when I am done
2 ask questions if I don't understand                       7 work on a better thesis that works for the whole essay
3.look for better quotes to work for what I want to say                        8.have conclusion sentences
4.think through what I am going to talk talk about more                        9.work on grammer
5.do pre-writing if I am allowed to                       10.work on the entire PIE paragraph formatt exspecially     the P


Please write any 15 thoughts about the book Slaughterhouse-5.  For each thought, please refer to a specific part of the book that generated this thought (for instance, “It was funny” receives no credit; “It was funny when he described the Tralfamadorians” receives full credit).

1.I didn't understand why the book was called Sluaghterhouse-5 untill Billy described how he was kept prisinor in a slaughter house 

2.I thought it was funny when Montanna Wildhack and Billy were on Tralfamadore having sex

3.I thought it was sad when Billy was in Dresden after the bombing looking for survivors buried in the rubble

4.I thought it was funny that Billy thought he trveled to a made up continent of Tralfamadore

5.I thought it was confusing at times when Billy's mind would jump all over the place like from war to the hospitol back to the war and then to Tralfamadore 

6.It was funny how the Tralfamodorians discription was of being little green people who looked like green plungers with green shafts sticking up

7.I thought it was funny how valancia was described as a fat person who always ate candy bars

8.I found it stange how it was an anti war book because it always talking about death 

9.Billy always said and so it goes when someone died

10.I thought there was a strange pattern to his dreams because when he feel asleep he went to Tralfamadore alot

11.I thought Billy was insane to write papers about his experience on Tralfamadore

12.I found a simalarity between Trouts books and Billy's experience on Tralfamadore

13.I found it funny how Billy was given a coat that was too small and and shoes fromthe play cinderella

14.I thought it was sad how Billy was taken prisinor and put in sluaghter houses

15.I found it to be sad when Billy was in a plane crash and was the only one to survive


State 5 possible themes for the book Slaughterhouse-5.
1.don't feel bad about who you are because everybody is unique in their own way

2.follow your heart and do what it tells you to do

3.make mistakes and learn from them

4.don't be afraid to tell people your feelings and what you think 

5.fight for thing you don't like


Write a conversation between yourself and Billy Pilgrim in which he tries to teach you a lesson based on his own experiences.  You must explain IN DEPTH at least 3 specific events and details from the book in order to receive full credit.  This conversation should go on as long as it takes to demonstrate YOUR UNDERSTANDING of Billy’s experiences.
EXAMPLE:
Billy: Hello, Mr. Cheng
Mr. Cheng: Hi Billy
Billy: Have you heard about Tralfamadore?
Mr. Cheng: No, what’s that?
Billy: It’s a planet where they... etc.

Billy: Hello, Michael
Michael: Hello Billy what is new
Billy: not to much, have you ever heard of Tralfamadore?
Michael: No what is it?
Billy: I traveled there last week and it is a long ways away.  It is a land that is full of little green people who who look like plungers with green shafts that stick.  Also they have 5 sexes on this land where as we only have 2.
Michael: Billy what is wrong with you, you are insane.
Billy: No I am serious it exsist and I travelled there.
Michael: what ever. do you time travel or something?
Billy: yes actually I do
Michael: well then were else you have tvaled?
Billy: i have been to many spot I have gone back in time to school my wedding and the war
Michael: speaking of war Billy what was war like?
Billy: oh it was awfull there should be no war I saw so many people die and get imprisoned, I had to look for bodies after a bobming at Dresden and it was just awfull.
Michael: because I am thinking about joining the army
Billy: well we still have war so should do what your tells you to I just didn't like war
Michael: ok well thanks for the help and advice
Billy: yeah don't feel bad for what you choose, I mean I choose to time travel and tell people about because I like it and don't care what others think
Michael: ok well god bye
Billy: bye